约翰霍普金斯大学2023年重生要求文书+民间点评！ 并附上了招生官的仔细评介
美国约翰霍普金斯大学宣布了2023年重生文书，并附上了招生官的仔细评介。
此前，在JHU的要求提议中，民间对文书的普通人去日本打工需要什么条件作用的界说是“Hear your voice and know you better”，即闻声你的移民日本需要多少人民币音响并更好地知道你。因而要求者能够在文书中增补一些在其余要求枢纽关头无从展现的用具，也许为已经提到的事务增补细节。
从民间给出的信息中，咱们能够看到，JHU指望从要求人身上看到这些质量：
坚韧不拔的毅力
未来首脑
有协作肉体
为他人思索
主动的人民
因而民间给出的这些顺利文书中，有乐于批准应战、愿意迎迓转移的日本绿卡需要什么条件?学生，有投身环保、非营利性职业的学生，也有情绪细致、晓得为他人着想的学生，这些质量无一破例都是JHU所注重的。
Ordering the Disorderly
by Ellie L. 2027届
Entropy is the property that provides the basis for the second law of thermodynamics, which states that the universe naturally gravitates toward disorder. Its explanation comes from the idea that the universe prefers to conserve energy; because energy must be put into organization, everything around us is constantly descending into an increasingly complex state of chaos. Cheerful, I know. While it may seem like a concept worth forgetting – especially with its conviction about an imminent “universal heat death” – entropy has taught me far more outside of the classroom than in it.
I, unlike the universe, have never been a very big fan of disorder. Admittedly, I worship the planner in my backpack, hate it when I have more than three unread emails, and am the designated pantry organizer of my household. I arrive dependably at school every morning half an hour early and have mastered the art of Marie Kondo’s file folding for each of my closet drawers. I have fallen in love with the idea of becoming a surgeon to dedicate my career to putting back together what has been broken –ordering the disorderly– and every organizational habit I have developed has been a microcosm of that passion.
However, life is often more unpredictable than might allow a color-coded spreadsheet to double as a crystal ball. When I am faced with a group discussion in which conflicting ideas create more questions than answers, or when I am rushing from track practice to a robotics meeting, worried about when to fit my homework in, I remind myself of the importance of entropy.
For a system to be considered at equilibrium, entropy must actually be at its maximum. In order to be stable, everything must be marginally out of control. This applies just as much to life as it does to chemistry. The best stories I’ve written didn’t start with an outline, but with random phrases I’d jotted down in a notebook in a moment of epiphany. My favorite chemistry labs were exponentially disastrous as they progressed, teaching me more about error analysis than acids and bases. My most memorable class periods were the ones that started with a lesson plan but followed the curiosity of the class, taking us anywhere from the taxonomy of mermaids to hiking horror stories.
Entropy is also a measure of the changes in the status quo of a system. The more unpredictable the outcome of a reaction, the higher its entropy value. Although I love my orderly desktop and preprepared Spotify playlists for any mood, I embrace copious entropy and all that it represents, because I, too, want to be the unexpected in a world that expects the status quo. I want to defy predictions and make world-changing discoveries, increasing my entropy as my impact tends limitlessly towards infinity. Though I don’t expect it to be easy and may occasionally enlist the help of my planner and about a million colored pens, I take comfort in knowing that my intention to excel as a woman in STEM and a young adult dystopian novelist pleases the universe.
A high entropy value increases the chance for both failure and success; it is both the natural way of the world and the primary supplier of chaos. I welcome both with open arms, though chaos and failure still scare me. Now, when I am the only one in my class with a particular opinion on our book or am stressed about the caveats of a busy schedule, I take a deep breath and recognize the potential to thrive in it. I am supposed to exist in chaos. I can venture into uncharted territory and comfortably embrace the positive that lies in the unknown, sure that when that entropic feeling inexorably takes over and life gets messy, I’ll be ready. To feel out of control is not the end of the world, but the natural state of it.
招生官点评：
Ellie的文章微妙地将“熵”作为一个延长的隐喻。日本企业直聘通过这个隐喻，咱们看到了作者对自身是谁以及盼望成为谁的深思。众多学生会写到他们指望完成的未来，譬如专长、职业、作用力或生涯形式。这种文章一般将指望的效果作为论点，而无奈资助咱们明白要求人。Ellie在通知咱们这种指望的同时，又不殒命自我深思的流程。咱们由此知道到作者乐于从同伴中学习、批准弗成展望的事物、致力推进现状。这些特质使咱们能在更深的层面上知道作者，并看到其与霍普金斯社区微弱的受室性。
Ellie’s essay skillfully uses the topic of entropy as an extended metaphor.
Through it, we see reflections about who they are and who they aspire to be. Many students write about a future they hope to achieve, such as a major, career, impact, or lifestyle. While that may tell us something about who they are, these types of essays often use that desired outcome as the thesis and not as a means for us to understand who the applicant truly is. Ellie’s essay tells us some of those desired outcomes without sacrificing self-reflection in the process. We learn a lot about who they are throughout this metaphor: their willingness to learn from mistakes, accept the unpredictable, and push the status quo. These are traits that drive Ellie and ultimately allow us to know them on a deeper level and see how strong of a match they are for the Hopkins community.
ELLIE L.（自述）：
我以为文书中的特性比专长性更主要。我在这篇文书上所获的最高责备是“能听到你的音响”，这注明它在多个层面上都拥有我的小我私家特征。我的提议是，在写作时只管即使依旧真正。